All Comments on 'Second Chances Ch. 02'

I love this story so far. The character development is good, and the overall tone (other than the rape scene) is so sweet. I love the whole set-up. The rape scene could have used some more details, however. The only other problem I have with your story is grammatical errors, of which you have MANY. But oh well, I'll sacrifice my dislike of technicalities for a good story. I truly hope you keep writing the other chapters! I look forward to reading them. :)

- LaLaLadidahGirl

this is great. tragic, but well written. and also, too short!

there's something about this story that keeps me checking your page for updates.

totally thick you should continue.

well done!