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Sorry, but I couldn’t make it past the first few paragraphs. It’s simply unreadable. Perhaps English is a second language? In either case enroll immediately is an ESL or English class.

This is the worst-written piece of crap I've ever tried to read. You should post it on ILliterotica. No puctuation sense, poor spelling, wrong word usage... I could go on, but naah.

Flip burgers, writer; you'll never make a living by the written word.

..but that does not mean you should stop trying.