All Comments on 'Secrets and Magic Ch. 03'

really enjoying your story so far can't wait for more chapters, so keep them coming please.

Please please update very soon. I need to read what happens next. It's like watching a sci-fi movie.

thanks for the great read

It

last year and I like the continuation just as much. Well written, lots of tension, mystery, the possibility of romance, danger. There's only one thing I can ask for... I hope that you update regularly this time and finish the story off. Looking forward to more!

MORE MORE MORE. NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT

more more more please it was getting good

Omg that was amazing and exciting and i need more. Please continue sooon!

Finis this story? Each time I come across it, I am more disappointed than the last.

It's hard to rate something you want to know the ending to. You have left us all hanging! Please finish up soon! Can't wait for more

Cruel, taunting, torturous. Loving the story. Hating the fact that there is not more. Good action, slickly written. Some descriptions are coming off vague, as though your mental image of the scene is not making it into print in the rush of writing. I can't believe I'm saying this, as much as I am enjoying the story, but, slow down. Describe, though balancing detail with flow is difficult.

May your muse hold a magnum to the back of your head and scream, "Write the fucking story, you simpering bastard! WRITE THE FUCKING STORY!"

All the build up tension is sooo delicious !!!! Great story. Thanks for sharing.