by erossmantic
Great story. I love how you built the tension and then really delivered in the end
... marvelous! liked it very much. should go to sleep now, but not before i've read part 2!
Great story, well written. The best story I have read in years on this site
Wow...you've seduced all of my senses with the one. This is by far the best erotic story I've ever read; I look forward to enjoying more of your work. I am going to treat my neighbour's bored husband to a night he'll never forget, all thanks to you. I don't think he's ever had her take charge or work his dick with this much gusto in his life. I'm off to create magic...
Didn't continue past Page 1, as I'd counted 19 mistakes.
That's one reason I don't post my stories publicly.