All Comments on 'Seducing Beauty Ch. 01'

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Oupa99Oupa99over 11 years ago
Great build towards climax

Great story. I love how you built the tension and then really delivered in the end

ottokarottokarover 11 years ago
simply...

... marvelous! liked it very much. should go to sleep now, but not before i've read part 2!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Brilliant! !

Great story, well written. The best story I have read in years on this site

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Wow...you've seduced all of my senses with the one. This is by far the best erotic story I've ever read; I look forward to enjoying more of your work. I am going to treat my neighbour's bored husband to a night he'll never forget, all thanks to you. I don't think he's ever had her take charge or work his dick with this much gusto in his life. I'm off to create magic...

friskypolefriskypolealmost 11 years ago
Amazing

Loved the story from start to finish.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Didn't continue past Page 1, as I'd counted 19 mistakes.

That's one reason I don't post my stories publicly.

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