by erossmantic
Didn't continue past Page 1, as I'd counted 19 mistakes.
That's one reason I don't post my stories publicly.
Wow...you've seduced all of my senses with the one. This is by far the best erotic story I've ever read; I look forward to enjoying more of your work. I am going to treat my neighbour's bored husband to a night he'll never forget, all thanks to you. I don't think he's ever had her take charge or work his dick with this much gusto in his life. I'm off to create magic...
Great story, well written. The best story I have read in years on this site
... marvelous! liked it very much. should go to sleep now, but not before i've read part 2!
Great story. I love how you built the tension and then really delivered in the end