All Comments on 'Seducing Jasmine'

It's a lovely story and well written but it would be much better, sexier written in the first person. "I" and "she" is so much nicer than "Jasmine and Maria" over and over.

I can tell you are a good writer, but there are elements missing from this story that make for good erotica. As with many lesbian stories, the writer naturally assumes that since there is no man, then there shouldn't be a masculine/feminine dynamic, but regardless of the genders involved, there always is. This story is feminine/feminine, and while it may be real, it doesn't make for an interesting read.

Lovely read and love the details for morning masturbation!

would love to look at lingerie with you!