All Comments on 'Seducing Jennifer Pt. 08'

The one big complaint I have is why you feel the need to make each chapter a separate Part instead of going to pages. It's annoying to have to find the next part, click on it and wait when it would be more continuous if it were another page. It breaks up the story when we are just getting into it. We are impatient to so eager to read what is going to happen next, that we forget to vote (your criticism in the next part). If you ran the story over several pages, then broke the story at a not so sexy part, you would get a lot more votes and a heap more comments.

Apart from this, your story if going well and is keeping me in a steady state of horniness.

I appreciate your input. I plan to rewrite this and post it all at once, just as you suggest.