by jacktar48
Ok, THAT I did not expect. Talk about a story making a bootlegger turn before doing somersaults.
Thanks for the proof-read. That one even got past spell-check somehow. Well, stuff happens.
Thanks again for this appropriate comment.
'Rondezvous' hardly makes anybody likely to want to read your story. Unless 'rendezvous' has gone out of use where you live?
You don't think Mom is completely whacked out? Awww...you read me like a book.
Thanks for taking the time to comment. I do appreciate it. This series is not for everyone, but what is? I'm up to part 25 and they're longer than they have been. Not sure how many to go, but I expect I'm not half done yet. There should be something every day for quite a while.
I'm looking forward to more.
I'm not at all convinced that Mom is a loon, but we'll see what happens.
Thanks for sharing your efforts of writing all this down.
Christi
I'll keep that in mind. It was kind of off-putting, even to me, but it was meant to teach him a lesson. But possibly the lesson could have been taught another way. Not sure how though.
other than the one part of Jacky being butt fucked i have liked all of this.