All Comments on 'Seducing Jennifer'

Without understanding who these people are, and how they got in this position, it's sex, but not nearly erotic. 'Seduction' doesn't begin with two people naked in bed with each other; it begins with them fully clothed. How they got to be naked with each other is -- or, at least can be -- what's really erotic. The step=by-step process is what's needed. Nevertheless, I gave it four stars.

...but they don't start naked. First line, third paragraph: "At the same time, his right index finger circled the base of her breast through her bra and t-shirt." Remember?

Thank you for taking the time to read, vote, and to leave the comment. I really appreciate it. I thought of adding more tot he beginning, but figured it would be better not to in the long run. I'll keep your words in mind for next time, though.

I'm going to have to reread this tomorrow Lol. I just got off work and reading right now is a blur for me Lol

Can't wait to read more like this !!