by watchdwag
Excellent story! It fit very well with the original & the ending was fabulous, as I enjoyed the way Jamie ended up with Erika. My only critique would be that I would have enjoyed reading about Erika & Kat's conversation about Jamie. And...exactly what did it cost Erika to buy Jamie from Kat?
I know enough not to expect more along this vein but I can only hope that in due time there may be a series about Jamie seducing Michelle and her descent into lesbianism. I would expect Tiffany would love to dominate Jamie and Michelle at the same time. One can hope but will not be disappointed if it does not happen.
that was nice now what is the next one going to be about make it very hot the next time ok
... so far, of the few I've read.
My only regret about your stories is that there's no foot fetish, which is my biggest fantasy & which would fit well with the submission.
I'm not trying to push you, though; I just hope to read more of this series! Things look very promising at the moment...
(and a very big thank you)
just love the way you put thene together your had me on the ege all the way ot the end thanks
I have really enjoyed reading this story. I love the idea of straight girls being turned into obediant lesbian sluts. Only another wowan really knows how to truly please another woman. Let lesbians rule! A well written story & I look forward to reading more.
Ive just finished this series and i plan on reading the rest of your stories i just gotta say i thorougly enjoyed them and you are a fantastic writer. Some finer details in the parts sometimes differ but all in all a great read. I hope you do more with your writing than just on here cause you have a talent.
However, when the chapters kept coming and the need for something new or exciting, I just couldn't stop thinking about what fun you could have created with a T-Girl entering the mix. Just a thought......
amazing series. would love to see what happens with Michelle. also what happened with the neighbor did kat and Taylor do as instructed and get her
what a series this is when can we have the next part where they get the neighbor and see jamie gets her girl
This is a very enjoyable read I can’t wait to read the next part maybe it will be the turn Lisa asked Kat and Taylor to do
I do hope the girls get there tattoos and Taylor gets her tattoo from Lisa
I have a few comments to this story.
1. Apparently all males are useless, sometimes they are allowed to watch (cuckolded) like Larry.
2. All females are lesbians or bisexual at least, even if they don't realize it.
More particular observations:
1. any straight woman can be converted into a lesbian in a week max.
2. all women safe a few are submissive (great, pls convince my wife:)
3. it is all the lesbians duty to convert as many straights to the right (lesbian) sexuality as possible.
For this story (in as far there is a story):
Ann: pretty normal wife who'd probably leave her husband if pushed to choose.
Larry: cuckold
Kat: dump that useless boyfriend and finally get to licking cunts
Lisa: Dom, and in my eyes very much not caring about anybody. Hate her.
Susan: see above
Kim: page filler
Taylor: see Kat.
Jamie: as above, and gladly suspecting her bf to cheat on her, while she's lapping cunt of 2 mistresses.
All by all, I didnt like the story. (euh, what story? Nothing really happens!)