All Comments on 'Seduction at Koko Beach Ch. 03'

by BlackDahlia69

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

your story is hard to read with the spelling errors I know you just trying to be cute, but it ain't working. Your story would be better without the jacked up language. You aint Zora neale hurston.

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