by doc87123
once again a new different and engaging story. Each theme you select is so unique that they are a joy to read. please keep writing.
A fantastic fantasy. I've been in a couple of copper faraday rooms, but never gold, but then he was very wealthy, wasn't he? It was very well written. very well. I could follow the thread, yet chuckle along the way- a pleasant journey. Thank you very much for the entertainment, sir.
This sounds a little like Willing Slaves. where a Formula is passed from 1 friend to another with each finding True Enjoyment from it. Your story could play out the same way . Showing the Folly of thinking that they can Handle it.
PLEASE keep writing your science-based stories.
You are certainly gifted.
I sincerely hope you are well again.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. if you decide to continue it, I'd love to see someone actually get the device to work.
I had a silent body hacker stalk me before. I know how great this can feel but I also know how this can be used for malicious reasons and in the hands of a pimp could be used to turn girls out or as an easy way to get away with date rape.
Sucks though that people use great feelings in the worst ways possible when they could be wonderful experiences.
Great as a one off! Coulda been 3 chapters but 2 and 3 would've been prohibitively short.....LOL