All Comments on 'Semper Fi Pt. 03'

Well written but a bit too mushy for my taste with all the talk of weddings. More sex and death, please. Looking forward to chapter four.

the same ocean in S.D. but a different atmosphere to relax. TK U MLJ LV NV

REMEMBER BEHIND CBG IS A REAL LIFE PERSON WITH ALL THE IMPLICATIONS AND COMPLICATIONS INVOLVED IN LIFE. TK U MLJ LV NV

Another great chapter!

Translations would be nice. You use too many commas.

Thank you to my favorite writer/author for this continueing story. All of your writing is so good I can't pick a favorite, love'm all.Keep'em comin please.

It is fascinating how go to a party setting can bring traumatic experiences to nice people. The love story is fine, the sex great, but I wish that there were more details about the murders so that we can have ideas....

Well you started your stories with Caitlyn fucking Frank throughout now its moved to Garret and Barbie!!

Why the fuck did Barbie and Garret go with them to the Magic Kingdom??!!

SO FRANK HASN'T YET TOLD CAITLYN THAT HE WAS FUCKING HIS PARTNER BARBIE!!

WHAT HAPPENED TO THE LETTERS FRANK WROTE TO CAITLYN??!! WHICH OF HER LOSER FRIENDS INVLUDING GARRET SABOTAGED THEM