All Comments on 'Sensation'

This story was going so well until the last line. Author, why did you turn this sexy love story into a cheating wife story with the last line?

It's very clear you've thought about how a woman perceives sensual touch, and this understanding came through very clearly in your story. It's a shame about those categories that draw the line for some readers. For me this was a beautiful, well-crafted read about a sexual experience, and that's all that matters for a piece like this. It was highly erotic and a real insight into the way women think.

Hey, I loved the last line. The last line made the whole story.

Only, Yakboy69, I think you had better stick to writing stories from the male perspective. You write like me when we try and write from the female perspective, we write like guys think (lol).

I don't think neither one of us would want a woman who thought like your character thought in that story. You made me want to slap her ass, grab her by the hair, throw her on the bed, rip her clothes off, and throw her a bang.

Okay, now that I think of it, your story was hot!

Thanks for the read.

bring Aussie girl to the States, we'll eat her in NJ

Fucking brillant

You've mastered a particular technique in writing that seems simple -- or at least straight forward -- but is quite difficult in practice. You've created a story/plot line that takes the reader along in a way that "is almost like being there."

Many thanks for your time and fine writing skill.