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Click hereHe rolled her nipples between his fingers and massaged her breasts as they kissed again. He let his lips leave hers, planting kisses down her cheek and along her jawline. He paused to nip at her earlobe before kissing his way down her neck. She shivered underneath him. "Harder," she breathed, sounding desperate. He straightened up, planting a hand on either side of her head, propping himself up on his arms. "You want it harder?" he asked, slowing down to an excruciatingly slow pace. "Yes. Harder, Darren, harder," she pleaded, bucking her hips against his dick. "Have it your way," he said, kissing her one more time. He rolled back onto his knees and picked up her legs, placing one on either of his shoulders. He straightened up again and pulled his cock almost all the way out of her pussy, then slammed it home. He thrust fast and furious into her pussy and she loved it. "Oh, Darren...oh yeah...that's so good...harder!" she moaned over and over as he fucked her. He felt the familiar churning sensation start to build up in his balls and he slowed down slightly, not wanting to cum before she did.
"Don't stop, Darren. I'm gonna cum. Don't stop," she moaned, kneading her breasts hard as she thrashed around under him.
Darren was on the verge of coming too, but sped up again, wanting to send her over the edge. He pounded her pussy relentlessly, dangerously close to the point of no return.
"Oh, God, Darren," Haley sang, reaching down and grabbing his hips, her nails digging into his flesh. He felt her legs tense up around his shoulders and her body started to shake. Her pussy clamped down around his cock as she came. And that was it for him. As her pussy quivered and spasmed around his cock, his balls tightened and he felt himself unload inside of her. He let her legs slip off of his shoulders as he unleashed rope after rope of thick, hot cum into her pussy. With the final spurt, Darren collapsed on top of her.
He rolled off of her onto his back, chest heaving, and closed his eyes, trying to stop his head spinning. Haley rolled over and pressed her lips to his again. "That was amazing," she said luxuriously, lying on her side next to him. Darren did not think he could form words at that point, and instead reached over and put his arm around her, gently pulling her closer. She took the hint and settled closer to him, her bare breasts pressed against his side. "Can I stay?" he asked finally, more to hear her voice again than anything because he was already fairly certain of the answer.
"On one condition," she said sleepily, eyes already closed.
"What's that?" he asked.
"Don't tell any of my students about this because it's exactly the kind of thing I'm always telling them not to do," she said, smiling up at him.
"Deal," he said, smiling back at her as her eyelids started to droop again.
- COMMENTS
Comentarista824 days agoIt saddens me to only now discover the story, because it popped up when I happened to be browsing and it's very good. The really odd thing is how well it scored, yet this is obviously your only story. I wish you had perhaps left to comment as to why you abandoned writing, although sometimes it only takes one fool leaving an unthoughtful comment to upend a new writer.
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For whatever it is worth, even if you don't read it, I'd like to have the satisfaction of leaving you a positive comment and feedback on your effort. The major thing that surprised me was that both Haley and Darren where exact character matches for each other: I mean it's almost like you researched their names and characteristics to get such a perfect match. Now once I say that, there was one inconsistency, which was on Darren's side and he was a little too blasé about one comment he made to Haley (it was too informal relative to his generally serious and more thoughtful nature). Some could also question how quickly Darren got into Haley's good graces, although I can't necessarily fault them getting it on in such a short time. You definitely presented enough evidence for them to like each other, and although some could think it is a bit rushed... I don't think it's something to ding the story for. You certainly excelled at describing their union, and made it plain that Haley really had it bad for Darren, and that Darren felt similarly for Haley. Now there is the question on whether or not you meant for him to be Darius or Darren...but that small mistake aside, it really wasn't a major thing because it can be corrected fairly easily and I've read several authors make the same mistake and not manage to catch it.
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I really liked the meeting effectively over a coffee accident, and how plausibly you drew them together. Since this is your one and only output, I would have been more forgiving anyway, and definitely say this rated a 5. You're probably never coming back, but I hope there's some slim chance you do if only to read this review and to be encouraged.
Anonymousover 10 years agoIt's a beautiful story. Very descriptive and equally captivating. Please write more when you can. You have a knack for it.
ILienBagbyover 13 years agowhen it was first posted. It was a wonderful read. You bother to create real, rounded, interesting people who a reader can care about. Oh, and the sex was fabulous. Do Southerners just naturally write well? This reader will watch carefully for your next post!!!!
Anonymousover 13 years agoI really liked this story (and couldn't disagree more with the comment about changing it to interracial adultery) but am having trouble seeing that a series will be even as good as the story ending just a very little bit further along.
Anonymousover 13 years agoKeep it up.
i would like to see stories along these lines but where the woman is married, and takes a black lover. Some should be with the consent of the husband, some would be great if the husband witnesses her seduction but she doesn't know he's watching.
