All Comments on 'Seriously? Ch. 01'

Why did you cut it short I want more please upload more soon longer chapters if you can pllleassse

Longer chapters please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It reads like my mind thinks.. refreshing from the same old "got to make sense" flow. Bring on the next chapter, please. :)

Please learn about punctuation. "?!" isn't acceptable punctuation in any language on Earth, apart from a private language written by one "Dinkyboots" on this site. Use an exclamation mark OR a question mark, please - your readers aren't 3 years old.

YOUR story! Use the ?! if you want to! I look at it as a question asked in anger or confusion. Great story so far. Wishing for longer chapters. :)

Please, I liked this.. more please :D

Why does Christine's character seem so fairy tale like but the rest of the story is the opposite? I can picture her as a Disney character. I think it's her walking around with the animals.

She's portraying a teenager....young adult that's how they talk and or IM text...etc..