All Comments on 'Sex, Cheating and Romance Ch. 04'

Who killed Sheila? 1. Olivia 2. Sharon

I didn't think that Sheila was going to die. I already figured that that she was a cheating whore. I know where this is going now but first it will be bad then good. We'll see.

Your chapters come quick and it's a good story. Thanks for sharing.

Start another one! There was this big cliff and then DG brought out this rope and

hung Randy over it! Thanks a lot DG!

The Bitch is Dead! Hi Ho the Dairy o, swing it high, swing it low, the wicked bitch is dead!

Now he needs to arrange for Ray Meads to commit suicide by shooting themselves in the head nine times with a .357 magnum.

(Pausing only once to reload).

And Bob Lock's accidental drowning after beer bonging an entire keg, with his hands tied behind his back.

You made the main male characters so dumb that it is hard to read, i don't like to nitpit but read the story yourself it is so lame as if some of the characters live in a bubble.

...that there are no circumstances under which it is satisfying to read a story in which the betrayer in question simply dies without anyone ever knowing what they were up to. Yeah, she is gone, and i know some people are perfectly happy to read that a cheater died (must be church goers....) but we the readers miss out on all the emotional drama that might have left us feeling some sense of resolution or restitution.

Most questions are answered in the next two chapters. I see the voting finally works. Thank you to those who are sticking around to read the rest of the story.

DG

But in my opinion these deaths also kill the story for me.

Considering the severity of these events, there seems to be very little emotion or motivation in this story. Hard to dig in & get involved.

you could have, at least written an ending to your stupid story

can't wait for the next installment. Please ignore the haters because all they do is hate.

its coming along really well. only one problem, its not being released at the same time everyday. lol... i wish it was just one big story. =(

Think I figured the story out;but, will wait for the other chapters.

makes her pay the final cost. TK U MLJ LV NV

I dont get it he did not trust her,so how did he not fiqure out she was a serial cheater. he meet her after a gang bang,some one who lived in the sleazy lane.

was the child his he now needs a dna match. how come the writer did not put that in.

this turned out lucky for him ,for if he discovered her infidelity .all hell would have broken loose. lawyers, prison for revenge attack etc..

Randy marries a biker girl ...a girl who use to fuck everyone...

and he cant believe she cheated on him ?

really? thats the story?

You ended it there?

This has stretched out a lot longer then it needed to temporally.

Please don't write this way again. I say this as a guilty party.

@Dear Harryin Va Old way of saying in the World: The love is blind. Many people do wrong decision in the love connection. Everybody will be wiser with age.....

I have to agree with FD45. That was an odd place to end a chapter.

Still, it's been a great story. A bit quirky, but that's part of what makes it an interesting story.

I read the 5th chapter and Victoria is DNA test proof daughter.

Good story,but what a way to end a chapter. I look forward to the following chapters.

When is his court date? After all, they were murdered and all signs point to hubby.

come on... she was a party girl a biker chick that like to fuck around. That doesnt make her a whore ...after all randy was the same way ...but given her background his trust in her was fucking delusional.

In the story carlos was running aroound on Sharon... sure she did not like it but if she wanted to keep carlos that was what she HAD to do. It was something Sharon KNEW about and was willing to put up wiith.

Randy did not kmnow abut even worse it never occurred to him to check

Can y'all come over an watch the baby cuz your daugter is dade but I hav a bunn coffee pot. DG, are you chitting me?

Thanks for the offering.

or the aftermath and clean up, TK U MLJ LV NV

I didn't expect it to be that drastic. I hope it turns.our the bikers drugged her. She was there to cheat, but hopefully.not with all three.

A whore to the end. I don’t know why he would be surprised that she missed her wild life.

A better storey,would have been Sheila surviving the crash,but confined to a wheel chair in future.A DNA test was done on Vicky which proved she wasn't his daughter but Carlos's which then caused the marriage to be annulled.

Sheila, the slut, finally got what she deserved as well as Carlos. I hope the other two rapists will also get their due punishment.

This story is finally getting better and better. Let's see what Sheila has to say!

5*

BJ