All Comments on 'Sex-Neutral?'

A big B.S. story--that is it--try again

If you can't keep up with who is hosting the party, Alice or Tracy, or which one of them is telling the story, how in the hell can you expect the reader to keep up with it. Zero for stupid, uncaring writing. Get an editor; the site keeps a list!!!

Story was garbled, confusing, poorly written, not erotic. But it took guts to post it. Try again, something halfway belivable.

Can anyone understand this nonsense?

Good effort but the story is confusing and I found the sex scenes could have been better. I got turned off with the male having a 12 inch cock - I don't like numbers.

This story was a jumbled mess. Kerry = Karry, too many characters, and the entire setup was just too hokey.<p>Even a half-assed stab at proofing might have helped. I recommend the author not abandon the ol' day job.

My biggest problem reading this was the number of names to remember. In fact, it seems as if the author had trouble too. The longer the story went the more the names were mixed up. Not a bad plot but I finally gave up trying to figure out who was who...

just an other new fashion writer where everybody is bi and fucking around or swapping or swinging and the whole thing is down to a level you can compare otheres eating a sandwich, that means it's meaningless. if it is so, why write about it.

Though confusing at time. The characters were many, it made me think & I almost drew a "family tree" to see who's who. What you can do is take a help from editors or ask someone to read your work before posting. Believe me there are good people on this site who'll help you out. Goodluck & keep writing.

Pigs without blankets do an orgy.