All Comments on 'Sexcerpt - PLT No. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Jeez, get an editor

Because your "style" of writing is confusing at best, irritating at worst. "1".

princessofheartsprincessofheartsover 10 years ago
Has lots of potential

Though your story seemed jumpy, and I'm not sure what THAT means, I got the intensity I believe you were interested in showing.

I enjoyed that it was all words and imaginations that took this couple onto the path toward BDSM, great way to evoke the reader's imagination. Now I want to know what is behind that door!

loveoverlustloveoverlustalmost 9 years ago
My hands are clean . lol.

Nice. A ,sort of , literary series of stroke stories. Your way with words did provide the necessary visual stimulus. lol. The BDSM scene was nicely done.

But then, where is the whole story ? The long novel that you mentioned . I hope you have posted it here. The characters have certainly piqued my interest.

BTW , gave it 5 sizzling hot & ....ummm.... sticky stars. lol.

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