by fanfare
Because your "style" of writing is confusing at best, irritating at worst. "1".
Though your story seemed jumpy, and I'm not sure what THAT means, I got the intensity I believe you were interested in showing.
I enjoyed that it was all words and imaginations that took this couple onto the path toward BDSM, great way to evoke the reader's imagination. Now I want to know what is behind that door!
Nice. A ,sort of , literary series of stroke stories. Your way with words did provide the necessary visual stimulus. lol. The BDSM scene was nicely done.
But then, where is the whole story ? The long novel that you mentioned . I hope you have posted it here. The characters have certainly piqued my interest.
BTW , gave it 5 sizzling hot & ....ummm.... sticky stars. lol.