by Allan_Arbinger
Phil plans to rape and kill Phylis as she represents a middle class woman but Phil is confronted with Phylis for the first time in a different package. He has seconds to decide whether to abduct her or something else.
By posting in this format, I wanted to determine if the average reader here sensed the imminent, heart pounding danger to Phylis or if I had to spell it out.
I'll expand it later, thanks, after current projects are finished.
Thanks for your feedback.
Allan H. Arbinger
Write a whole story. Or at least a
(Just use your imagination to finish the next four paragraphs of this critique )