by RedHotLadybug
at prom she was 19, she was held back a year. Now she is 18? They only take in girls. is it so they have fresh breeding stock? Did the vampire Louis kill that babies parents? Or did he knock up the mother and killed her because she was one that tried to leave
Great writing, love to see you write professionally
Love it. So few erotic stories are well written and this is definitely a good one.
I love vampire stories. I find the setting and characters really great. I have enjoyed the story and look forward to more.
Love it! The characterization is great. I love reading stories where there's more to it than just sex... I love where you are going with this... Can't wait to read the rest!
that definitely picked my interest. Vampires bit on the classical side, but that's not bad. At least they don't glitter in sunlight or something. But the setting seems quite interesting. Keep it up. I want to read what happens to the girls.
It was great to have five chapters to read all at once! lol
I'm liking this a lot - can't wait to see where you're going with it.
and it's quite interesting. I like the characters and I'm looking forward to finding out the real motives of the university. There's got to be more important and sinister plans. Bloodlines- mating, new blood... perhaps? The story is moving at a good pace and progressing well. I'm looking forward to more. Thanks for writing.
I can't get over how just when you find out one thing you have like three more questions- the suspense is awesome. Good sex stuff too- you're def keeping us on our toes :)
I don't watch television much, so I can't compare / contrast it to any young adult sitcoms going on. Nonetheless it has that feel to it and I'm really enjoying how your drawing each "episode" out. Although I do wish you had more written already. I'm very curious as to where things are going and I echo many of the questions the girls have.