All Comments on 'Shadows and Light Ch. 02'

It was Ian's own brother who did this to Isabelle? It gets stranger and stranger, and I am hopelessly caught up in the story.

I'm gonna need a daily fix. Very suspenseful. You feed us so little but just enough to keep our appetite for more. If you're like this in bed...

you explain little. if there were preceding chapters i apologize for not reading them.

maybe subsequent ones will explain a bit and be a bit less lacking in humanity

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HELLO!!! It does say chapter 2!!!! HELLO!!!

E.D. you are on the right track. I'm loving this, but feeling strung out already, not enough at once. May we have more please?

Interesting, but baffling. This gave some backstory, but not enough to make sense. I gather it's some kind of paranormal, but I'm not sure what's happening.

I have enjoyed the first 2 chapters of your stoyr. Your slow into makes me feel like I'm reading a novel as opposed to a short story.