All Comments on 'Sharing the MILF List Ch. 08 Pt. 2'

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Anonymousalmost 11 years ago

HOT

Just about came in my pants reading this . Keep up the great work.

garyblue almost 11 years ago

Picking at nits

You write several times, "Her head lulled …", or similarly. I believe the word you want is "lolled"; hung loosely or laxly.

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Contrasting almost 11 years agoAuthor

lolled, not lulled

G, I think you are exactly right. Thanks for pointing that out to me! -c

Anonymousover 5 years ago

Good

Better Best !!

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Confused

Great story but who is Mrs Rossini. Is her name Natasha or Sasha. Because Sasha is not short for Natasha, Tasha is Short for Natasha. Sasha is a different Name altogether.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Late the Game

Love this story. But when Sonny ignored the bump upstairs at Annie's, the third maybe fourth indicator that alarm bells should be ringing and he ignored it...

...I wanted to throttle him. It is so inconsistent with his mastery of observing the world around him. I know it has already played itself out but it is frustrating. You have so many juicy tangents hanging precariously, with no realistic time for them to play out soon.

Thanks