All Comments on 'Sharing the MILF List Ch. 08 Pt. 2'

by Contrasting

Sort by:
  • 7 Comments
Studio8101Studio81016 months ago

Wow. Such control.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Late the Game

Love this story. But when Sonny ignored the bump upstairs at Annie's, the third maybe fourth indicator that alarm bells should be ringing and he ignored it...

...I wanted to throttle him. It is so inconsistent with his mastery of observing the world around him. I know it has already played itself out but it is frustrating. You have so many juicy tangents hanging precariously, with no realistic time for them to play out soon.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Confused

Great story but who is Mrs Rossini. Is her name Natasha or Sasha. Because Sasha is not short for Natasha, Tasha is Short for Natasha. Sasha is a different Name altogether.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good

Better Best !!

ContrastingContrastingalmost 11 years agoAuthor
lolled, not lulled

G, I think you are exactly right. Thanks for pointing that out to me! -c

garybluegarybluealmost 11 years ago
Picking at nits

You write several times, "Her head lulled …", or similarly. I believe the word you want is "lolled"; hung loosely or laxly.

Still ✰ ✰ ✰ ✰ ✰

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
HOT

Just about came in my pants reading this . Keep up the great work.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous