All Comments on 'Shattered Boundaries Ch. 05'

Not a good situation to be stuck in France after the world has ended! Wonder what the red heads name will be?Great Story!

Read it all tonight after this posting. You're developing a really intriguing storyline. I can't wait to see just what kind of Hell-spawn you've created for us. Succubi? Somehow that doesn't feel quite right. I'm sure to be pleased. Nice exposition and character work.