All Comments on 'Shattered Dreams'

Thanks Mygypsy for show how most abuse victims first cope when the get to some place safe.

I was a big critic of Stolen because of the violence but the story was excellent. Now I'm hooked on Ren and you've given us Janey's story. It's so real, so sad. You have written it so well that my heart breaks for her and her family.

I am a hopeless romantic so I'm hoping that she'll have a happy ending but I do know that in real life that usually doesn't happen.

Thank you for showing her family and how they have coped with her disappearance. This is a very powerful story, and I look forward to more.

It's a pretty good story, so far, but it doesn't end; it just stops. That's a bit frustrating, especially when there is no forewarning that this will be a first chapter of several to follow.

-- KK in Texas

I keep playing scenes in my head like "she sees ren" blah blah blah and I KNOW its going to take time BUT MAN I wish I could like DIVE into your brain and read whats up there. Cause I mean yeah stolen was harsh but (honestly if your into that kind of thing then ~shruggs~ your into it) honestly I love it. AND I THINK I WILL REALLLLLLY LOVE THIS STORY!! So awesome PLEASE KEEP THEM coming and FAST~!!

plz give your readers more of the story plus on ren , and brad

excellent story--must be true! But now that we care about Janey, there must be more??

I really liked this part of the story. Also I liked Ren's view. But please, please.... get them back together. I now... its not realistic but hey... we speaking about fiction. Thats a whole new world :). And I think Ren and Sky are a pretty good fit.

I'm so glad you decided to write what happened to Janey once she got home and I really hope you continue to add to it. These characters are so real, we want to know how they went on from this ordeal. Please add another chapter soon....and to Ren's story as well. I just love your writing. Thanks for introducing us to Janey's family and letting see how they dealt with her disapperance.

I am a reader not a writer i love to read and recently i read "Stolen" then i read " Ren- Shades of Grey" they were both fantastic stories , they turned me on , they mad me angry ,

they even made me feel guilty for enjoying them but this story so far just makes me cry. So thank you for your stories . Have added you to my favorites because i realy do enjoy your stories please keep writing

That poor poor love

I'm copying another post, because it's exactly how i feel. I'm a UK male

Excellent Story

I'm so glad you decided to write what happened to Janey once she got home and I really hope you continue to add to it. These characters are so real, we want to know how they went on from this ordeal. Please add another chapter soon....and to Ren's story as well. I just love your writing. Thanks for introducing us to Janey's family and letting see how they dealt with her disapperance