by BarelyLegal4now89
For the category I think its quite good. I noticed another reader gave negative comment. The category is "Non-Consent/Reluctance" which by definition means she is not a willing participant. If people find that offensive, and many do, then they should stay out of the category. Its simple logic. Don't get discouraged. You wrote a very good story for this category.
which does mean not willing. That is a good point,but that does not always mean a rape fantasy! It seems to be all about the non consent and not about the reluctance. That is the promblem with this sort of story. Most of us have dark fantises but this is still a bit much in my opinion. Still it was ok.
is something that most women never have the opportunity to have. Although I personally prefer getting women in situations where they have to choose sex over extreme embarrassment or jail. We all have fantasies of "taking" a woman and leaving her sexually satified, but physical force from the beginning is more than most half decent men are willing to go. Even so, as far as the story goes, she is in for a LONG night.
iliked it, a hot turn on , she went there wantin some and got a lot,sometimes that is a good thing
Very hot, but I wanted it to keep going. She was obviously loving it and hopefully she would cum hard and often. I have just noticed part 2, so will read that and hopefully I will cum hard with my dirty old fat cunt then.
Oh My God you just ended it like that! This story should go on for at least another page.