All Comments on 'She Likes Showing Off Ch. 04'

Some of the dialougue feels a little unnatural, like people say "Don't" not "do not" when they speak...usually. Don;t mean to nit pick. But all and all it's a pretty good story. Keep it going. Very hot.

This is an oft repeated theme but u have handled it so well and sensually

Hey, there, you are writing some really hot stuff here. Thanks and keep it up. I like your story telling style.

Great story! My wife loves to show her cunt to others as she keeps her self shaved .

Now that two close calls.....will there be a strike 3? Your OUT as a Hot Wife