All Comments on 'She Said, He Said'

Your story has a lot of very nice touches, but some of the extra words and typos get in the way.

"About the end of those two weeks, the phone rang one evening. Her heart skipped a beat when she heard his voice at the other end. He apologized for not calling before that and said he had not been allowed any time by himself to call, but he couldn't stop thinking about her, he missed her so much."

Consider "Almost two weeks later, the phone rang. When she heard his voice, her heart skipped a beat. He apologized for not being able to call sooner, but he had not been allowed any time to himself. His voice broke, when he said he missed her and couldn't stop thinking about her."

You are telling a wonderful story, it just needs a little pruning in my opinion. (Which with a dollar will get you a cup of coffee.)

It is too bad that he did not start a new baby with you, so he could have had your and his baby to love.

You write so beautifully. Loved the story!!

Killed her. Or at least beat her up really bad and do something to damage her permenatly. Yeah I am a voilent person when it comes to cheating. And it depends on how I all happened and how much I loved him.

a great story...it funny how sometimes we don't get a choice about who we fall in love with....

it was the real wifes edict that ruled, TK U MLJ LV NV