by janevalenz
wow. what a great story. i really liked it. but it was just way too depressing.
Amazing writing you are really gifted with dialogue, I love somemore on this story!!!
Very touching and I loved how the unfolding events reflected the lyrics in the song. Nicely done!
Great story, the dialogue is really well done, natural and seemlessly moves the plot along. Its rare that you read a piece on this site that has much emotion behind it. And the sex enfolds in a realistic way as well. Really beyond erotica, well done.
Great story, the dialogue is really well done, natural and seemlessly moves the plot along. Its rare that you read a piece on this site that has much emotion behind it. And the sex enfolds in a realistic way as well. Really beyond erotica, well done.
Extremely well written, great punctuation, everything! Hope your heart has never been broken.