All Comments on 'She Will Be Loved'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
way too sad

wow. what a great story. i really liked it. but it was just way too depressing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
beautiful writing

Amazing writing you are really gifted with dialogue, I love somemore on this story!!!

Bridget69Bridget69over 19 years ago
Great story!

Very touching and I loved how the unfolding events reflected the lyrics in the song. Nicely done!

gdavisgdavisover 19 years ago
Very realistic

Great story, the dialogue is really well done, natural and seemlessly moves the plot along. Its rare that you read a piece on this site that has much emotion behind it. And the sex enfolds in a realistic way as well. Really beyond erotica, well done.

gdavisgdavisover 19 years ago
Very realistic

Great story, the dialogue is really well done, natural and seemlessly moves the plot along. Its rare that you read a piece on this site that has much emotion behind it. And the sex enfolds in a realistic way as well. Really beyond erotica, well done.

nighthawk22204nighthawk22204over 7 years ago
Beautiful story...

Extremely well written, great punctuation, everything! Hope your heart has never been broken.

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