All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 04'

.....very much ;-)

Getting better and more intense each chapter. I like the amount of inner dialogue we are getting. I'm going to devolve into bitchy fan a minute.....wish Celia had held out longer, Blaine needs to grovel more and I wish Kyra had busted down the door to scratch the chick's eyes out (but that would be to easy, lol). Okay, done. Really, I am enjoying everything as you are developing it. There are so many possibilities for future angst.

I'm very much enjoying reading this story. However this chapter felt like I was reading lots of scene summaries. they all moved the plot forward but didn't really pull you into the story.

You need to post double or triple chapters or something. I hate waiting. Keep writing em and i'll keep reading! Just, please hurry...pwese? =^_^= PK

This story in becoming a great one very very fast! I enjoy the way you develop your characters and looking forward to continue reading more of your work.

Please don't keep us waiting long.......

I like the pace that you are writing this story. it is moving quickly, but as a reader I like stories that are short and to the point. Keep up the good work. It's your story, tell it however you want to. All I ask is more on the vampire. She is interesting. 5 stars

Poor Kyra, I hope that Malcolm is able to get to her and explain the misunderstanding before she goes back with Nicolette thinking he's cheated on her. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm glad that Celia has returned, and that she and Blaine are going to be a family. It seems that her time away has helped Blaine grow into the man he needs to be to be a good mate and father to her and their children.

I had a feeling that it would turn out that Julianne is BJ's mate. I can't wait to see how you're planning to play that out. I'm glad that eventually Julianne will be able to live back where Celia is. It sounds like the two friends really need each other.

I can't wait to see what you have planned next.

Enjoyed the heck out of this one IR2R. You keep going girlfriend, you're doing wonderful things here!

CLIFFHANGER CLIFFHANGER CLIFFHANGER......

GGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHHHHHAHAHAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing story IR2R! I cannot wait to see were this goes on to.

love it cant wait to see where it gose from here and hope malcom gets to kyra and is able to explaine that it was his room mate

she hurt poor baby

I only wish it was a little slower paced in some places so that I could savor it. ;)

I like Celia and Blaine's story. You did a nice job w/the back story. I like how you snuck in the part that Celia and here family are just a little different from the rest of the pack. It certainly allows you to break a few Were rules like being pregnant w/o being mated. And now BJ wants Julianna and she thinks he's so hot she can hardly speak to him. And poor Kyra, will she find out Malcolm hasn't cheated on her before she goes back to school? So much good stuff going on I can't wait for the next chapter

This story is childish. Are you underage? Nobody can have this kind of emotions? First she left the house and her mom. Than she came back and the father had the right to talk to her in private and she forgives HIM??? Now way. You live in lalaland.