by ManosHands
Yes your story is developing well!! ..getting hotter and hotter! Looking forward to the next installment...Hmmm wonder if Bill is gonna sample Vicki...or is Janet ripe for the taking!!!
Normally I don't like multi-part stories carried on simply to tease the reader and prolong the suspense. But yours was a natural progression with the characters teasing each other in their first meeting then continuing to being full sexual partners in the second part. You wrote it well.
Let's hope there's more to come?
Certainly plenty of openings...lol
Soon as it gets warmer I'm off to the dunes at Talacre Beach myself!
Opens with mutual orgasms and stays hot from there. Captivating and cock-hardening.
You write so well... Perfectly paced and love where this is going... Waiting for your next installment...