All Comments on 'Sheeit, This Is Gonna Hurt!'
by bandk
- 14 Comments
Anonymousover 17 years agoVery nice work bandk! It reminded me of the John Carter of Mars series by Edgar Rice Burroughs. :)
Anonymousover 17 years agoWell done could be expanded into a full book or books. My best to the author.
MopeyDickover 17 years agoThis was really good... so good in fact, I skipped all the sex! arrrggghhhh! i must be getting old! :)
OneIBlindover 17 years agoI occasionally browse the SciFi category and I'll certainly be looking for more offerings by you. Great story, as others have said,"you could make this into a full book or series" in the vein of P Anthony or Isaac Asimov... Excellent submission!
manfromvenusover 17 years agoYour combination of excellent imagination, story line, and delivery. Along with some excellant sex, made this an very pleasant read.
Keep up the good work, I will be reading more of your stories.
bandkover 17 years agoAuthorI am writing a sequel to it for those that want it, however this last week or two I have had writers block
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThis is honesly good enough to be made into a book, obviously you would probably have to tone down the sex, but there is enough here to make a novel. You should consider adding more discriptions and such and submitting it to a sci-fi publishing comapany. Seriously
Anonymousalmost 16 years agoThis is a remarkable piece of work, I really enjoyed. Thank you for writing this wonderful story. BRAVO!!!!
Anonymousabout 15 years agoThis piece was simply amazing. Loved every word of it. It was better, I think, because it had a story and dind't jump straight to sex. 100/10. In other words, better than perfect. Needs a sequal. If there is one, what's it called?
Anonymousover 14 years agoWOW, that was a wonderful story, thank you so much. I love your characters and the plot was exceptional! I have not read many Sci-Fi stories but will in the future. Please please do a sequel to this and continue the story for us. My life is not the greatest and it’s great to loose myself in your stories. Once again, thank you so much, I loved it. 100/100
Kayleigh Australia
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoGreat story...i normally don't leave comments but this story really appealed to me...romance...nice erotic scene setting...excellent...keep going...
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