by bandk
Great story...i normally don't leave comments but this story really appealed to me...romance...nice erotic scene setting...excellent...keep going...
WOW, that was a wonderful story, thank you so much. I love your characters and the plot was exceptional! I have not read many Sci-Fi stories but will in the future. Please please do a sequel to this and continue the story for us. My life is not the greatest and it’s great to loose myself in your stories. Once again, thank you so much, I loved it. 100/100
Kayleigh Australia
This piece was simply amazing. Loved every word of it. It was better, I think, because it had a story and dind't jump straight to sex. 100/10. In other words, better than perfect. Needs a sequal. If there is one, what's it called?
This is a remarkable piece of work, I really enjoyed. Thank you for writing this wonderful story. BRAVO!!!!
This is honesly good enough to be made into a book, obviously you would probably have to tone down the sex, but there is enough here to make a novel. You should consider adding more discriptions and such and submitting it to a sci-fi publishing comapany. Seriously
I am writing a sequel to it for those that want it, however this last week or two I have had writers block
Your combination of excellent imagination, story line, and delivery. Along with some excellant sex, made this an very pleasant read.
Keep up the good work, I will be reading more of your stories.
I occasionally browse the SciFi category and I'll certainly be looking for more offerings by you. Great story, as others have said,"you could make this into a full book or series" in the vein of P Anthony or Isaac Asimov... Excellent submission!
This was really good... so good in fact, I skipped all the sex! arrrggghhhh! i must be getting old! :)
Well done could be expanded into a full book or books. My best to the author.
Very nice work bandk! It reminded me of the John Carter of Mars series by Edgar Rice Burroughs. :)