All Comments on 'Shelly & James Ch. 01'

Thanks C2C for well written erotica, always happy to see a new item for you at Literotica...You are one of the few who "shows not tells" the most basic tenet of good writing...Cheers

Hi C2C,

I must say that you paint an oozing picture of Shelly and it's not just words. Throbbingly erotic. Congrats.

bith my husband and I realyy this series, keep up the good writing

tessia

It's too bad that Shelly did not develop a need for John's baby from that big ole cock....

Got to "Her and John would be waiting for me." and stopped in my tracks. Why read on?

He and his wife sit down with a total stranger, in a place where no one is looking after their interests, and down drinks that are waiting on the table.

Have they never heard of drugs? How well is he going to defend his wife if he is drugged?

If he drives like he lives, take his licence away.

Liked the story, well written & erotic fiction

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why read all the way through them leave a dumb comment on a cuckold story being gay ... idiot

Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wonderful story. My wife was with about 45 guys before me. She's dirty with me, but I love the stories of her handling and working another cock. She tells stories about picking a strange guy at a bar and jerking him off on the beach. I'd like to see her in action deep throating a cock and slutting it up.

Loved the thought of the reluctant wife being seduced and going wild,I was imagining it was my wife,great story

You weave a great story. You write so well it makes it easy to imagine myself there. I love the way you allowed her to really enjoy John's big cock, but at the same time make sure her husband knew she still loved him above all others.

This is one of the best stories I have read. I am looking forward to continue to share their adventures.

They risked each other and found each other again. What next?

Cuck and white pick their man.

Wow I could relate to this our first time I had only watched from afar at the bar and I left before them to our country home. My wife was a virgin before me and when he finally got that monster in her he was pulling her pussy lining out before thrusting into her again and again. After he left and I layed down foot to head next to her I knew her pussy would never be the same for me again. She hardly blinked and never said a word while I masturbating to her ruined for me but more beautiful pussy, later she told me she had almost left with him .. unlike this story I was scared to ever share her again with anyone.

Grotesque