All Comments on 'Shemale Becomes Friend Ch. 04'

Max was pretty unlikable and kind of a pouty immature bitch in this chapter. He chose to get into this and then treated Jolene shitty. He’s right, she deserves much better. He needs to correct it.

Good! I'm glad you slipped him onto the path of redemption there at the end of this chapter.

I like story and how it's progressing. I hope you continue to write it and possibly longer chapters.

I only wish that I had a friend like Joline.

I look forward to the next chapter

Sounds like the friendship is taking a more intimate turn for the both of them. Turning into a nice series. Hope you continue writing about it

Hope it continues

I've read each as they've been posted and they keep being great. Of course I've liked the sex, but I also like seeing Max coming to terms with both his sexual desires and his clearly growing feelings for Joline. I can't wait to see where this story goes.