All Comments on 'Shipwreck'

story that left more questions than answers.Her name is unusual,could she have come from the M(aria) Celeste?

for sharing your vision. Well written, tight use of words and very visual word pictures. Please share more of your talent with us.

It was a great story, but can you make a second? There are so many questions! Like, where did she come from? Where did she go? How is the necklace important? Thanks for the good read!

This story cries out for a next chapter or two. Mysterious woman floats in on the sea, has sex with him and leaves a single pearl on his pillow, but where does she go. Is there a road to a village, does she just disappear into thin air?

Thanks for the feedback! You guys made my day.

Maybe I'll start working on a second installment!

It's a nice story, and I was grateful that I didn't have to get out my ass-wand in order to cum on this one...(the clean-up is a pain-in-the-ass! ("scus' the pun...if you know what I mean.)

A little bit of constructive critisism:-

(a). Get an ass-wand....

I can see a few directions a second chapter could go in.... Hope you'll write a second installment.

I never find flotsam like that on the beach.

Loved your story.

Leave me imagining as to whatever.

Why won't this damn system allow me to offer a full quota of stars?