All Comments on 'Shirna Jones - Alt Sexual Healing'

Illustrations are far superior to anything I seen on Literotica. Very erotic story too!

Great illustrations and great story! I agree with previous poster, far above the usual level of illustrations in this section.

I loved the illustrations as well as the story.

Thought the pics were sterile.

Maybe not 100% but at least 90%.

I loved this story and the illustrations as well. I will be looking for more.

excellent grade illustrations..well done.

Thank you all very much for your constructive criticism especially those who have emailed me directly with offers too naughty to leave in a comments section. I'm currently considering where to take this so any suggestions are welcome. To the person who emailed me to say real photos would have been better - I totally agree, but then if I had models to pose for me I would never have a free hand to write with. To Oriondog - I'm so sorry you feel these images are sterile but to be honest I enjoyed the writing mostly and did the images for fun... as you evidently have more expertise than me perhaps you'd care to show me how to put more life into my work? Please don't take this the wrong way - I'm all for constructive criticism.

Thanks again to the faithful few.

Pickle46

These illustrations are much more arousing than actual photographs could be! Would love to see more stories illustrated like this, but with even more of the nasty stuff!

Can anyone draw the nympho from Tripping the Riff? Would love to see her getting it after all the teasing she did on that short lived program!

I really enjoyed this illustrated story, and hope you will continue with it. I'd like to see how you handle the next steps in the story, with continued sex scenes. This is one of the best things I've seen in the Illustrated section of this site.

The story was very well written and the illustrations capped it. Keep up the great work Pickle.

that was excellent graphics and story keep writing

excellent story and graphics. keep up the good work!

Veryy Good! Absolutely loved the plot and the graphics were fantastic! Hurry up with the next few chapters!

love the illustrations & the plot as well

can u tell me from where did u get these pics , or rather. how did you make them??

Heh, this is very nice, I thought it was terrific. If you could, could you send me an email at mob-playa@hotmail.com saying how you made those images, thanks.

great story and super pics!!!

XXX

Miri

Wow your a great writer, i loved the story... also could you email me at toriastarr@yahoo.com and tell me how you made those pics thanks...

It was different and I loved it

i loved the story plot and the pics! By the way please e-mail Shaymasta@aim.com how you made or created them?

Please write a sequel to this excelent story. Tell us when Carl goes back to Shirna and they have sex. May be Shirna lets him put it up her arse after he fucks her. Great pictures!!

Mike NZ

You're a sad little pathetic fuck, you know that?

Seriously! This was the best laugh I've had the pleasure of enjoying for such a long time. Oversized computer generated animated titties ... in a nurse's outfit!! OMG! RIOT, RIOT, RIOT!

Pa. The. Tick.

Really.

Sorry you missed out on the fundamentals that might've made you a whole human being, but boy (girl!) did you miss out!! Good luck with the fist and the K-Y ... obviously you'll need it.

thank you for this beautiful story.

great story! in a perfect world (or maybe even this one), people would have wonderful medical options like Dr Shirna.

loved it!

Woah, I’m utterly speechless and please continue writing Illustration stories

I so enjoy your RAW illustrations that get the point across! Should be MORE - additional continuing tale! LOVED IT