All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance - AU Bk. 02 Ch. 04'

nice.

but it can seem a bit disjointed.

Only comment: see to it that the Sholans take out the Others and punish the Priests....

Christmas in July twice love thanks for the update.

I hardly can wait for the next instalment , great story !

Great story so far, one thing though, with how you have people interacting with each other, its sounds sort of rehearsed and unnatural, cant put my finger on it exactly but non of the characters really flow properly with each other. Besides that going good and looking forward to the next chapter.