All Comments on 'Sholan Alliance Ch. 03'

I'm really liking the story so far. Please keep writing. You definately have talent for this.

the story is well done, now and again minor grammar flaws but very rare.. keep this one going pls

Ditto on the other comments about your talents and the story line. Thank you for allowing us to share the ride and do please continue.

I love this story. Alien/human stories are one of my favorite genres. I love to read that an alien neds helps with fighting a battle and they team up with a human an in th process hey copulate and a new race is bon between the two and forms a bridge for the races to form an alliance.

I somehow managed to screw up the chapters. I have submitted a change request to put the chapters in the correct order. Sorry all.

It is a litle diferent from your other sturies , but just from the space. It is a good story , with almoust visual efects , and Bill is so funny guy when he starts to give headaches but also you almoust can feel he is a warrior too like Jim from < The World of Rannicke > . Thank you for the wonderfull stories .

I have really enjoyed reading your stories. They are really entertaining. You sence of humor is great and you express it well in you characters. I like that you do not make all of you characters in to Mr and miss universe in looks and appenditures lol.

It's a bit difficult at times with the timing, as mentioned, but overall a very fun read.

Jason

I don't know if you received the e-mail I sent you but if you did check out the stories on the other link. Anything marked complete on that site has been edited.