All Comments on 'Shoplifter's Payoff'

by SweetPrettyAss

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
what a couple of gentlemen

Alright, look, this:

"The men's reason for raping girls like her was for their own sexual fun, not because of any particular misogyny on their parts. That was why they always used baby oil and the pre-lubricated condom."

is ridiculous. the category is non-con. you're gonna get haters. but it is what it is. don't throw this silly shit in there. just fucking own it. other than that, good story.

SplendidSpunkSplendidSpunkabout 10 years ago
I did Like the Writing

Lord trading sex for a couple pair of panties? Y'all could have up the ante, maybe a nice watch or necklace. Other then the fact that someone believed they' go to jail for a $20 offense and allows consensual or non consensual sex to occur is a non-starter, I almost expected to her say, "same time next week guys? I need a bra"

happybetahappybetaabout 10 years ago
yeah,baby!

My dick be up

MelOdysseyMelOdysseyover 6 years ago
Own It

Totally agree with "What a Couple of Gentleman" comment. Throwing that little tidbit in there threw me off. I don't care about their background and morals. I'm in non-consensual for a reason. But there than that, good job.

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