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by Jack_Slade

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KaenaKaenaalmost 16 years ago
Very Nice

Very good story. Hope you plan on writing more. I love the twist at the end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
not quite my thing but...

great twist at the end and I liked the playfulness of it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

i much prefer the male to be dominent. can u write stories like that, where the men are dominent and women submisive?

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