All Comments on 'Shopping for a Massager'

Shot and oh so sweet.

I loved it. Please submit more.

I can appreciate the swirl of thoughts. Great first story. I hope you write more.

A lovely erotic tone poem. The actors, mood and setting are artfully painted with just the right palette of words. Bravo! The audience cries, "Encore!"

Well written, sexual and imaginative !!!! Loved it

This is excellent! I loved it!

Oh my.....

I can’t believe this is your first story....Although short,it REALLY got me worked up big time! Thank you for that ;)