All Comments on 'Shopping for a Massager'

Oh my.....

I can’t believe this is your first story....Although short,it REALLY got me worked up big time! Thank you for that ;)

This is excellent! I loved it!

Well written, sexual and imaginative !!!! Loved it

A lovely erotic tone poem. The actors, mood and setting are artfully painted with just the right palette of words. Bravo! The audience cries, "Encore!"

I can appreciate the swirl of thoughts. Great first story. I hope you write more.

Shot and oh so sweet.

I loved it. Please submit more.