by docBlue
Nice story; loved the twist at the end. Are you writing for M. Night Shayamalan?
Didn't expect that ending,needed a better transition. Was really hot story up to that point.
especially the husband-wife connection in the end.
Really, an outstanding tale. Great description, excellent dialogue (especially with the drunk-speak). The twist at the end was unexpected -- and very entertaining. I'd give 6 stars if I could...