All Comments on 'Should Old Acquaintance?'

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Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingalmost 15 years ago
Don't know how I missed this one

Really, an outstanding tale. Great description, excellent dialogue (especially with the drunk-speak). The twist at the end was unexpected -- and very entertaining. I'd give 6 stars if I could...

rocker_wiferocker_wifeover 15 years ago
Your story was delicious . . .

especially the husband-wife connection in the end.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wow

excellent story! I came twice and loved the way it ended!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
was different

Didn't expect that ending,needed a better transition. Was really hot story up to that point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love It

Loved it, especially the end. Write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice story

Nice story; loved the twist at the end. Are you writing for M. Night Shayamalan?

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
nice job

agreed. well-written with a nice twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Neat

Nice twist at the end.

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My stories are fictional, although each circumstance was based upon an actual event (& place in the travel stories). I've added fantasy to the reality in order to extend the possibilities, mostly via feedback from some readers wanting to see things escalate to another sexual ...