All Comments on 'Show But Don't Tell'

Noting comparitive maturity of 'stranger' characters, the only unexplored issue appears to be whether male arousal leads to further interaction? If noticed by either submitted character, the logical conclusion is inevitable.

Roll on the next step, for both characters?

we need a sequel This is a great descriptive build up to the action that must invarialbly be continued. Don't make us wait too long. It's a 5 so far.

Wouldn't blame you a bit if you left it right here, but I wouldn't mind either if you revisited these characters. This was a very steamy read, thanks for your fine effort. Max052.

You did a great job with this story and how a woman feels when she exposes herself and watches the arousal and desire in the lucky man's eyes. As a woman who has felt that arousal and desire, I thought you did a fabulous job with the detailed descriptions and the woman's perspective. I hope to read more of your stories.

Got my pussy swollen.