All Comments on 'Shy Auditor Shows Her Assets Ch. 05'

It's a great story!! But the chapters are wayyy too short. It takes just a few minutes to read and then we're left hanging.

I am loving the story as you build it. I do enjoy the "left hanging" at the end of each chapter, it leaves me wanting "MORE." The character building is great. I am looking forward to each morning's read. Have you thought about an "after Nude camp" sequel?

I believe you meant "bizarre", unless the court is full of market stalls.

Whilst I'd rather have short, frequent instalments than longer chapters with massive waits between, this one did strike me as unnecessarily brief, truncated even.

You got a 1* because the chapters are too short... lengthen them out so that they flow and you will get the mark you deserve!!

kinda short. but still good.

GREAT STORIES THANKYOU

I just love puns and malapropisms and catachresisisms. Think of how many different bodies Ann was seeing 'bazarre' is an amusing error.

As for short chapters, mostly non-writers complain about that. There were a thousand+ words to this chapter. Try this, time yourself as you type out a thousand words.

Write a letter or just copy something. Then corrections and other editing and see how long that took you. You will better understand the labor good writing like this entails.

Another excellent chapter in an enticing series.

I honestly don't see this as a particularly short chapter. I think it may be because of the ball game with the scenes of obvious or intentional titillation. Those bits were the sexiest bits in this story, and like orgasms, we want more of them and longer ones. The story is verrrry good just as it is. Thanks for sharing it.