by hampshiresub
really good story but...
...you needed to finish it. I'm not a fan of these "To be continued." things.
Is there, in fact, a sequel?? Or was this just a tease?
Great start, either way, well written, erotic, powerful. I like it- but by that I mean, I like it SO FAR.
Please don't tease with the words, "To Be Continued." Anxiously waiting for additional chapters...and soon! Love the woman in charge theme.