All Comments on 'Signed First Edition Ch. 03'

I know that hardly at all a comment can contribute to the outcome of a story, but like him (unsaid, assumed), I fear of what could happen when hes gone... Taking the PHS into account, the command to "live on" could bring her to attempting suicide several times only to "get off" when she pulls back at the last moment as obeying his command(s)... I guess after reading the chapters so far, is that they will get lucky and have a loving healthy child (his, not someone else's, done in a lab or naturally) for her to "live on" for... otherwise layer upon layer is going to need to be added to her PHS to prevent eventuality's of the previously stated nature...

otherwise I fear for the gruesome outcome of this story, said, or unsaid when the reaper comes to cull

Really interesting and well thought-through story. Good stuff and I look forward to reading more.

Well thought out, very good story. make both of them happier by getting her pregnant,

By far the best hypnosis story I have ever read,never rushed or pushed too far. He allows her to safely submit as he is learning to dominate her without losing the love they share.